After we made the initial changes we held another focus session with different people. This time they suggested:-

• That we cut down the time our Vox Pops take on our report.
• That we cut down the ammount of time on our report about Tiger Woods.
• Make the sports report slightly more formal / less gossipy.
• Make weather report less formal by sounding more chatty and less like a national weather report.

We took these suggestions into account when re-recording our report.