Faults with Script

The are bits of the script (as shown below) that i am not happy or sure about.

The over voice is something i am not keen about doing, however due to the deadline drawing closer it is a back up plan incase anything goes wrong.

I have already had one problem. The yellow Datsun, belonging to Louis Howard, has been in the garage quite a bit and when filming some practice shots down a industrail estate the car flooded it self when doing a sharp turn and as seen on the practice shots, what is rather amusing aload of smoke and petrol spills out of the exhaust and tank. Therefore we had to put filming on hold ready for another day!