Ajustments

From getting some more feedback off my media teacher, I was advised to make some adjustments in order to gain the best grade.

It was said that there was too much colour on my front cover page, mainly due to the fact that I chose not to cut out my model on Photoshop, so the image I have used has a blue/grey background which i believe makes the cover look bland. i therefore need to brighten the background and make my model stand out more. Also, some of the font I have used makes the cover look slightly dated, therefore I am going to change this in order to bring it to an up-to-date looking magazine.

The Double page spread appears to have a lot of writing and limited pictures. I need to keep my audience in mind with this (age 13-14 girl) as they would prefer much more pictures and less writing. Therefore this is another alteration i need to do. Another problem with this spread is that the first page looks more like a poster so I need to move some text and pictures around.